I agree it's a little "awkward" from some (most) angles...
It could have been much better with just a few small changes.
I did a little 'shopping to see what could be achieved...
Original (for reference):
Modified:
Even though the modifications are subtle, I think the result is more balanced and more coherent.
Your critiques and suggestions are welcome...
Cheers,
Redback
It could have been much better with just a few small changes.
I did a little 'shopping to see what could be achieved...
Original (for reference):
Modified:
Even though the modifications are subtle, I think the result is more balanced and more coherent.
Your critiques and suggestions are welcome...
Cheers,
Redback